He said he'd be back

Dec 21, 2016 2:31 PM

Chswhat

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He said he'd be back. It was a long time ago now, 10 colds ago. He was my best friend and I was his, we went everywhere together. Until that day. We were playing and he fell from the fence, I watched it. It didn't seem so bad but I guess it was. Nobody came to help and I couldn't reach him. He put me here to keep me safe. Now, I wish he didn't. I keep looking and hoping he'll come around the corner. I'll keep waiting. That's what friends are for.

When they took him away, they were crying. He looked at me and gave a thumbs up. He said he'd be back. The time doesn't bother me much. The cold hurts for a long time but the sun still can warm. The tree keeps me from falling, so I'm safe. I wish he was in a tree and stayed off the fence. I'll wait. It isn't the same without him. He always said I was his patient friend, so, I'll wait. I see his family a lot but they never notice me. One day.

I'll wait forever Chippy

storytime

this should be a Pixar movie

9 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0

Not sure whether to laugh or cry. Good on you @op. The best thing a writer can do is make a reader feel something. Mission accomplished.

9 years ago | Likes 15 Dislikes 0

I don't get it?

9 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Make you believe it's about a kid who got hurt and forgot his toy. Ended up being Chippy the squirrels toy.

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9 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

Yeah. That shit was hard to watch.

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