Hi, not sure if our feedback should guide you. Best to create because you have the urge too. Individual pieces and comments might not show you the right way, but you can be sure that if you continue to discover what’s really in you, you will discover beautiful things! (and yes, I love it)
Foreground, horizon and space are each beautifully legible and the colour combination makes me feel happy… I’m surprised at how much depth you’ve captured with dots. Love it!
Looks great! I usually draw my stars with 8 rays, but 4 rays lends a different feel, like more sci-fi. I hadn’t thought of that. Nice work @OP, I love the colors!
I have mixed feelings...execution and craftsmanship are on point. I'm uncertain about the "busyness" of the foreground skyline, if that's what it is intended to be. I really like the concept of the colored lights in the buildings as that means into your style. For me it competes a bit with the rest of the piece and I find the details kind of being lost, but at the same time I can't stop looking at it, and often that's the Hallmark of well made art.
Yes, I'd agree. It think it needs more space to breathe. I'd push the buildings and the clouds apart. I also wonder what it'd look like if the horizon and foreground skyline were outlined in with a lighter color.
Gorgeous! I love how much you are able to convey depth just with the textures. The only note (and take it for what it's worth; I can barely draw dumb line doodles) maybe have the dots in the mid-ground could be more uniform and in straighter lines toward the vanishing point to convey a sharper realism. Idk, like I said, I'm no Picasso. Ultimately though, I love the piece; I would buy it and hang it up. Keep at it :)
This is an amazing art piece. It, it makes me feel feelings. I would absolutely hang this in my apartment after I had it on display in the hospital that I work at first.
The foreground buildings seem too busy. The amount of colors and the size of the blobs kinda muddies the form they're on and hoards too much focus. The individual multicolored lights vibe works better as background. I'd have simplified for the fore. And the way they rise at the sides but dip toward middle draws the eye to this pretty crowded central spot in the back. Love the 3D form on the buildings though. And the clouds are neat.
WitchyVixen
That's adorable! I love your style
spideramidstthestars
Hi, not sure if our feedback should guide you. Best to create because you have the urge too. Individual pieces and comments might not show you the right way, but you can be sure that if you continue to discover what’s really in you, you will discover beautiful things! (and yes, I love it)
43Taylor
The work is very beautiful
IIikethecutofyourjib
I feel as though the dots on the buildings could go. Like, it would be a really cool contrast.
Zwanderer
Love it! Would hang this prominently somewhere in the apt. <3
MoodyMagpie
Foreground, horizon and space are each beautifully legible and the colour combination makes me feel happy…
I’m surprised at how much depth you’ve captured with dots. Love it!
OhIfIMust
I love it!!
CALAMOSCOPYJANE
Very cool perspective effect, interesting colours, really well done!
AttentionDeficitHyperDepression
Somehow, this makes me think this is actually the home planet/city of the Among Us crew... and that'd be pretty sus!
loopdesigns
I've been a fan for a while now, my first thought was: it's busier than previous works. It's a bit more complex. That's not a bad thing.
Great job!
gentlemanmouser
Love this! Might be my favorite of your work. Thank you for sharing all of these. You make good stuff.
TheRicM
Looks great! I usually draw my stars with 8 rays, but 4 rays lends a different feel, like more sci-fi. I hadn’t thought of that. Nice work @OP, I love the colors!
humblewordsmith
I have mixed feelings...execution and craftsmanship are on point. I'm uncertain about the "busyness" of the foreground skyline, if that's what it is intended to be. I really like the concept of the colored lights in the buildings as that means into your style. For me it competes a bit with the rest of the piece and I find the details kind of being lost, but at the same time I can't stop looking at it, and often that's the Hallmark of well made art.
KuroFluff
Yes, I'd agree. It think it needs more space to breathe. I'd push the buildings and the clouds apart. I also wonder what it'd look like if the horizon and foreground skyline were outlined in with a lighter color.
dontfindmewhenthisisover
Gorgeous! I love how much you are able to convey depth just with the textures. The only note (and take it for what it's worth; I can barely draw dumb line doodles) maybe have the dots in the mid-ground could be more uniform and in straighter lines toward the vanishing point to convey a sharper realism. Idk, like I said, I'm no Picasso. Ultimately though, I love the piece; I would buy it and hang it up. Keep at it :)
alternateartreality
Thank you so much! ou
XSurvivor
My art knowledge doesn't go farther than like it/don't like. And this one? I like it...
PENlSMAN
Title: heavy nitro hit while high on the city
theinternetkeepsmealive
I know fuck all about art but I like it.
KillingTlme
Personal opinion. It is too cluttered and colorful. I like aspects of it, but overall, it's not something I enjoy looking at.
Kizmet2327
#1 if you’re making prints, I’ll buy one. I think it’s great
alternateartreality
Hello! I do have prints I can get you one if you’d like :)
Roaddog184
This is an amazing art piece. It, it makes me feel feelings. I would absolutely hang this in my apartment after I had it on display in the hospital that I work at first.
alternateartreality
Thank you so much!
Roaddog184
You are welcome.
Neednoggle
I like the lil UFO
ByThePowerOfSCIENCE
👆 that's Bob's ship
now it's an IFO
alternateartreality
Thank you!
Sagromus
I simply love it
catnapperlu
This would make a wonderful print on fabric.
SaladinIskander
I love it
buddbilly
I would call it “Space Invaders.”
HelikaformerNubisKnight9
I really really like your art. The colors, your technique! Beautiful!
SrPootStank
Very cool! I love when people make art with a unique style.
CanadianOneDollarCoin
I think it’s awful…
CanadianOneDollarCoin
…ly good! :)
MoodyMagpie
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CanadianOneDollarCoin
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ElbowDeepInAGoblin
The foreground buildings seem too busy. The amount of colors and the size of the blobs kinda muddies the form they're on and hoards too much focus. The individual multicolored lights vibe works better as background. I'd have simplified for the fore. And the way they rise at the sides but dip toward middle draws the eye to this pretty crowded central spot in the back. Love the 3D form on the buildings though. And the clouds are neat.
alternateartreality
Ya I can see that maybe it would be better a little more simpler
titoitoi
Has the goblin fancier ^ actually seen a city?