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Stand too! Stand too! We hear the call, Armed and ready to fight and fall. To stand by the oath of our army creed to defend the true north, strong and free.
Helmets on and weapons ready,
Seeing shadows in the distance calm and steady. Come at us come at us! We think in our heads, we'll fight and shout till you're all dead.
The battle is won as the dust and smoke clear, the dead litter the field as our soldiers cheer. We honour our dead and give thanks for their fice. We get back in our trenches and get ready for the night.
nasreal
This is pretty awesome, man. Every time I have tried to write poetry, it just comes out feeling...contrived.
ImOldGregIveGotAMangina
Really cool! A very nice theme, and the perfect length also. Some of the words you use are fairly elementary though.
ImOldGregIveGotAMangina
I would suggest going back through with a thesaurus. Nice job, and keep on writing!