Going out on a limb

Dec 11, 2023 4:57 PM

Bienjodido

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Basically my local neighbourhood newspaper put out an ad for a writing comp. Prize is 300$. Not much but would be amazing to win. The catch is that the story has to be ABOUT the neighbourhood and under 1000 words.

So I come up with a story that I think is hilarious and works perfectly. Butttttt I'm not an artist AT ALL. What do?

Here's the illustration I came up with. Took me 15 mins in ms paint. Sure to rival the Mona Lisa.

And here's the story. Dont worry it's quite short.

I know it's stupid as, but it made me laugh

Didn't say I won or anything (results aren't out for a few weeks) but made me feel really good!

I had about 20 similarly absurd short stories just sitting on my hard drive, I figured "well I have a cover, may as well publish an anthology!"

So here it is. If you liked the story above there's a lot more like it here :) and if you want to read it but can't afford a buck for it I'll send it to you for free somehow. Just message me

https://amzn.asia/d/b74ZqAV

Anyway, thanks for reading and have a good day/night! You all are the best

gratz

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

>author never wrote about the totally sweet bus-delorian jumping off the bridge through time to land on some 1850s barge

2 years ago | Likes 21 Dislikes 0

You're very funny. Good luck with all this.

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

there are 30 similar stories??? where the fuck do you live that has such entertaining and awesome authors and artists?

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

I couldn't stop thinking about the scene in the Simpsons where Grandpa is telling a run-on story about tying an onion to his belt.

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

2 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

A disaster involving a bus? Sounds like Pittsburgh.

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Good luck OP!!

2 years ago | Likes 15 Dislikes 0

"...trying to *buy one half of a zucchini." That being said, I laughed, so your writing did its job. Well done.

2 years ago | Likes 75 Dislikes 0

I read "by" as "be" first, and I was even more confused.

2 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

See the last big pier near the centre on the other side? I fell through that once while fishing. Bounced off of barnacle covered piers and lost all my gear. Good memories.

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Congratulations! May you keep doing what you enjoy and being seen along the way. Regards, someone else walking the path of Words and Confusion.

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

I really like your style of writing, it drew me in with your first words and I was smiling through the whole story. Well done!

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

90% of success is showing up. Great fuckin job @op!

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Yay! A new thing to read! Already downloaded. Thank you :)

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

@op I'm a graphic designer if you need some help.

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

@op also I do publication layout. Check out my work at www.alisebelcher.com

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

lol spotted the Transperth bus right away

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

Very nice. Thanks very much.

2 years ago | Likes 0 Dislikes 0

"But there was no punch line."

2 years ago | Likes 4 Dislikes 0

Like we don't know @Op's real name isn't Dork Yarrow. Pfft.

2 years ago | Likes 3 Dislikes 0

I loved your story.

2 years ago | Likes 2 Dislikes 0

...A Modern Canterbury Tales?

2 years ago | Likes 1 Dislikes 0

Why the hell does a short story require a picture. If you write a thousand words you've met the criterion.

2 years ago | Likes 35 Dislikes 1

I think because it will be published in the local newspaper? So they want an accompanying picture I guess? Beats me really

2 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0

Yes, but she need two thousand words and you know what they say about pictures...

2 years ago | Likes 26 Dislikes 0

So that's two pictures.

2 years ago | Likes 7 Dislikes 0

Found my new desktop wallpaper for my work computer.

2 years ago | Likes 174 Dislikes 0

Hell yeah!! Glad you like it

2 years ago | Likes 30 Dislikes 0

2 years ago | Likes 9 Dislikes 2

One day I'm gonna get shitposting in the dictionary as a means of communicating complexities with minimal artistic effort and this, <*horrible kissing sound imitation*>

2 years ago | Likes 5 Dislikes 0